tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post4501939112350279771..comments2023-07-01T07:55:51.614-07:00Comments on Un Vase Fragile: MemoryMistyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06971852036197350639noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-7492393888379099132010-08-27T20:19:07.118-07:002010-08-27T20:19:07.118-07:00And this one transports me to another place and ti...And this one transports me to another place and time. Again, lovely.Michelle DeRushahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07658349105535790020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-76727338668982906832010-08-26T23:21:23.539-07:002010-08-26T23:21:23.539-07:00absolutely gorgeous writing, friend. it seems out ...absolutely gorgeous writing, friend. it seems out of a book... so beautiful. xoMommy Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09989213786947802537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-12273062669927251992010-08-26T19:40:50.136-07:002010-08-26T19:40:50.136-07:00Oops ... I apologize for posting twice!Oops ... I apologize for posting twice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-48240404402659065182010-08-26T19:40:27.240-07:002010-08-26T19:40:27.240-07:00This is tender and sad and beautiful. I love the ...This is tender and sad and beautiful. I love the last paragraph especially, the juxtaposition of innocence and maturity, always a strange place for young girls.<br /><br />Much love.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-18618205010928710592010-08-26T19:40:25.811-07:002010-08-26T19:40:25.811-07:00This is tender and sad and beautiful. I love the ...This is tender and sad and beautiful. I love the last paragraph especially, the juxtaposition of innocence and maturity, always a strange place for young girls.<br /><br />Much love.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-30321930614413666352010-08-26T18:07:14.655-07:002010-08-26T18:07:14.655-07:00This speaks to me. It is lovely.This speaks to me. It is lovely.Shannan Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06240696987027358314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-20478433751382037002010-08-26T14:36:34.311-07:002010-08-26T14:36:34.311-07:00Beautiful - tender and poignant - makes one reflec...Beautiful - tender and poignant - makes one reflect on their own memories. I also felt part of you -- you painted such a vivid picture, the cold, the coffee, the truck,the hands on the key board, the growing up pains of identity -- <br /><br />A truly unique walk back through the windows of your mind.<br /><br />Keep on writing you have some wonderful things to say.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-1615894696978065472010-08-26T11:42:09.792-07:002010-08-26T11:42:09.792-07:00Makes me think of myself at twelve - especially my...Makes me think of myself at twelve - especially my 12-year-old-piano-playing-self.<br />Your last line really grabs me.Amanda MacBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333540126086381630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-15533858401700574122010-08-26T10:40:56.260-07:002010-08-26T10:40:56.260-07:00these changing worlds... what are we to do? :) swe...these changing worlds... what are we to do? :) sweet post that draw up memories for me as well, as i am one of 3 girls, too, and we sat squished in a cab of another truck a lifetime ago. thanks for taking me back home, :) and for visiting me earlier today.pattyhttp://findingserendipity.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-44809778127324680532010-08-26T10:20:36.999-07:002010-08-26T10:20:36.999-07:00Memories make such sweet prose...love "tickli...Memories make such sweet prose...love "tickling the ivories". Such wonderful imagery in this piece. Lovely writing!<br />:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-33494233369918596362010-08-26T10:11:04.830-07:002010-08-26T10:11:04.830-07:00These are sweet memories. You make me want to writ...These are sweet memories. You make me want to write mine, too. I like this part:<br /><br />"viennese cafe smoking pale white tendrils against winter smells of sawdust and vicious cold, my hand burning around the mug."<br /><br />You made me see and smell and feel this.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01221703763145912238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-10885766207559465752010-08-26T08:36:54.252-07:002010-08-26T08:36:54.252-07:00Gosh, Misty you made me feel 12 again.Gosh, Misty you made me feel 12 again.Jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09934973314360291318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-79773979982169262010-08-26T08:34:18.361-07:002010-08-26T08:34:18.361-07:00tight write and beautiful piece...i have memories ...tight write and beautiful piece...i have memories of time in a wood shop with my great uncle lawrence that ring as sweet...nicely played.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8911909193911121656.post-4473175440498389272010-08-26T08:13:55.256-07:002010-08-26T08:13:55.256-07:00There is poignant beauty here, in pictures of tick...There is poignant beauty here, in pictures of tickling the ivories and the old rugged cross and stepping over that threshold of experimenting with eye shadow. Lovely.Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04881750571782158938noreply@blogger.com